tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post2092732759118111717..comments2024-01-24T22:53:43.099-08:00Comments on Crescendoing Silence: BurnSadia Khanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-43710592436399550192013-10-09T10:19:24.703-07:002013-10-09T10:19:24.703-07:00:):)Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-57112297639406493082013-10-06T22:29:35.753-07:002013-10-06T22:29:35.753-07:00The world has burned before
it will continue to bu...The world has burned before<br />it will continue to burn<br />for once start living for u , <br />for u......Fahad Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16183017633899044902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-12856585149607402532013-10-06T02:08:39.627-07:002013-10-06T02:08:39.627-07:00You know me inside out,
You see the fire, too...
H...You know me inside out,<br />You see the fire, too...<br />How the world pouts,<br />and, what I actually woo...Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-70604854549521246462013-10-06T02:04:44.316-07:002013-10-06T02:04:44.316-07:00Thanks, Brian :)Thanks, Brian :)Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-67210607839053043962013-10-05T06:13:36.365-07:002013-10-05T06:13:36.365-07:00The name might differ
but the identity wont change...The name might differ<br />but the identity wont change<br />your words have the passion unchained<br />It burned before<br />the flame still exists....Fahad Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16183017633899044902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-33391803661865210502013-10-05T05:29:53.003-07:002013-10-05T05:29:53.003-07:00to kiss the nape of the sun,
you would surely burn...to kiss the nape of the sun,<br />you would surely burn...it makes for some wonderful <br />passion play though...and nice rhyme scheme<br />to drive the flow...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-49843804370279207202013-10-04T22:38:19.215-07:002013-10-04T22:38:19.215-07:00Thanks Jennifer :)Thanks Jennifer :)Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-89384205610775219832013-10-04T15:17:19.366-07:002013-10-04T15:17:19.366-07:00The repeating lines of your close really amplify t...The repeating lines of your close really amplify the emotion of this piece. Nice work!Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-90763326963892762092013-10-04T11:42:32.002-07:002013-10-04T11:42:32.002-07:00So glad to have you here, Kathryn ... Yes, even I ...So glad to have you here, Kathryn ... Yes, even I wish so :)Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-48611721029070686392013-10-04T11:12:29.081-07:002013-10-04T11:12:29.081-07:00So beautiful, if only slumber could hold onto our ...So beautiful, if only slumber could hold onto our angst.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-51293168005172426052013-10-04T09:35:59.411-07:002013-10-04T09:35:59.411-07:00Thanks Rajesh for coming by :)
It's about an u...Thanks Rajesh for coming by :)<br />It's about an unrevealed anxiety from some source, a source that burns the rest of some soul.....and, it's about the escape from the source ...Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-63900769244481652322013-10-04T09:17:37.945-07:002013-10-04T09:17:37.945-07:00Thoda complicated for me. Is this about the Sun or...Thoda complicated for me. Is this about the Sun or is it about hope or is it about something else? I wish it were in Urdu. The angst is so beautifully conveyed in that tongue.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04899689846101356598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-84991646300496146112013-10-04T08:24:27.987-07:002013-10-04T08:24:27.987-07:00Thanks a lot, Keith :)Thanks a lot, Keith :)Sadia Khanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831867051205108089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5146527910765511576.post-63337134089335751782013-10-04T08:02:24.658-07:002013-10-04T08:02:24.658-07:00Sadia this is wonderful...powerful close. Sadia this is wonderful...powerful close. Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.com