Tuesday, 29 January 2013

Remember ?





 Remember?  You are a free bird

Go find your unspoofing abode

Peace and trust guiding the gates of where

Reach for the Moon, marked by the arrow ‘GO’

Love awaits with open arms and naked eyes

Eyes, a gateway to heart, once heard

I was a halt, a place to rest your unbridled thoughts

Go-Slow, U-Turn and Stop are not your captivators

Spread your wings, go, go, go

Soar high in the clouds

Use unused unclenched fist to hold onto your dreams

And the metal claws I gave you to unhinge the door

Clouds with the silver lining, lightning your flight

Grey sky with hued horizon watching and guiding steps

The cage I built once, to steal you from the world

Too shattered and a bit tattered failed to conceal you

Shrines of past and caricatures of present

Tomb engraved with aghast sorrow and pain

Misery and tears assemble to congregate

Go fly, before they delve for your sublime soul

Resurrection happens to vampires and angels

Don’t wait for mine, I am a feeble insatiable trap

Fly, fly, fly, before I change my mind and

Incarcerate your wings and make your breaths mine...

 

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