Pain these words have is fathomless!! Nice work!
Your welcome! :)
Quite interesting but painfull in reality.... :(
It is...Thanks :)
def evocative of pain..but also longing...i drink thy silence in my cup of being is a great line...evocative...
Thanks a lot, Brian....longing is always painful, when one is awared of the truth that death can only bring some respite from heaving pain of love ..
Dark and painful, but with an interesting rhyme. Quite a different piece :-)