She Only Laughs
‘Come again’
She said it through a wincing pain
‘A few things never stay’
Words elbowed to make their way
‘And what would they be in my case’
Spitting her annoyance on his face
‘Call for your patience, it’s time now’
And she shrieks, ‘Wow’
‘Love is not being selfish’
‘And, you’re done with this dish?’
‘Life moves on, and so you should, too’
‘You found a new girl to woo?’
‘Oh, c'mon, don’t be a bitch’
‘And, what about ditch and switch?’
‘I was a fool to love you!’
‘I loved you, and still do’
‘I don’t care’
‘Cause, you fear’
‘Fear of?’
She only laughs
And His fear echoes in her last tear!
I have to say ... this is one of my favorite of yours ... just too good, and the way you rhyme your stories ... so much to learn from you !!! Awesome.
ReplyDeletePS: The last line is MIND-BLOWING.
Thanks Amrit :)
Deletemmm me thinks they fear love and commitment just a bit...its sad to see in people...so afraid they never get what they really need or want...love is a risk
ReplyDeleteOf course it is, Brian..thanks :)
DeleteNice Read, A G+ for ur post and Have a Nice Day. . . :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
Deletehappy wednesday...smiles...
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DeleteWhoa! Nice one
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteSounds like a very turbulent relationship. Love really shouldn't be selfish, true.
ReplyDeleteRight, Jennifer...thanks :)
DeleteLoved the dialogue structure in the poem and very beautiful rhyming!! Loved it Sadia :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sri, a lot :)
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