Watery ecstasy raining from your dreamy
eyes,
Drenching me as I get hold of you my love,
benign
Perfectly filing your delicate curves,
intricate angles,
As your velvety pearled skin glides under
mine
Burning desires and melting passion,
I crush all under my manly thrust
Heaven is where I dwell at the moment,
Under my sweaty self, our love blossom
Your parting lips, yearning for more,
Savouring you is my only living wish
Reaching your tongue, a tryst hence accedes,
Twisting and twirling, we play a little while
Drinking your liquid love and glossy
warmth,
I caress your honey dripped moist skin
Warped am I cupping all our candid emotions,
Mellifluous still remains the love we share
Devouring all the flavours from lips to
neck,
Bosom is the search my lips fondly indulge
Melodious sound of your heavy breathe,
Rhythm filled moment makes me crave for
more
Small hungry kisses and passionate love
bites,
Colouring your cheeks red as you lovingly coy
Urge is melting and so are we with the
moment,
Making out with you, my love, maneuver
sublime
Curling up all the gaps and spaces between
us,
I take you on a ride of delirious pleasure…
You know I am a big movie buff, and there are some movies that really take my breath away. You can take the examples of PURSUIT OF HAPPYNESS and BABEL. I never get tired watching them, and every time they leave behind a deep impression on my soul.
ReplyDeleteNow, this is exactly what your poem does. This piece is so powerful, full of heart and soul, and burning with a raw passion that it sticks on to your thoughts, grasping your heart tightly long after it has been read. I have read it at least 5 times now, and each time it's beauty increases ten fold. I don't know what special ingredient you have used in preparing this delicacy, but it sure is a masterpiece.
WAY TO GO MY FRIEND :-)
an overwhelming comment this time....thanks a lot...n am happy that you liked it...
DeleteYesssss...a looonggg way to go :)
You use such vivid and accurate imagery in your writing. The reader is actually in the scene.
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Thank you Kim...I try to touch the accuracy where visalization gets easy and enjoyable...still learning and appreciation like yours definately helps me grow :)
Deletebenign? Kindly, mild, ... I suppose it could mean gentle. It seemed a funny word for such a passionate poem. Nicely done--- it isn't always easy to write a poem like this and keep it from getting bawdy. (not sure I have ever used that word before - ha)
ReplyDeleteBenign has been used for the lady and yes it means gentle...to maintain that subtle element in the poem and to keep it at bay from gettng too raw...
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reading ur stuff is like watching a muvy....verryy interestingg...
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