Crevices
ajared,
Nooks
darkened
Words,
floating void,
Slashed
and drained
She
is the daughter of the ocean
Her
thoughts float-succinct, soigné
Message
appears on the surface,
To
breathe in the endurance
For
the fraction of the second,
Dare
you attune?
Anatomy
of fancy sloppy breaths,
Sleazy,
disguised and blurred
Wear
the beads of blinking stupor,
To
catch her dreamy glimpse
Trinkets-serene
and svelte,
She
has sworn to dance in
Diving
deep and gulping the black hole
You
got the strength to hold her and stop?
The
sense you derive is fake and bony
Fathom
the nude darkness and,
Reap
to sow…
Wow!!! love the words you used, really it is a word mermaid!!
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Deletedang, this really takes it up a notch at...anatomy of fancy sloppy breathes....lots of energy in this...and really focused as well...leading up to that last line...and the truth of it
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DeleteSo so so touching :') Very beautiful. The words you have used to describe is amazing, such an extensive vocabulary! :)
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