Monday, 6 May 2013

Word-Mermaid



Crevices ajared,
Nooks darkened
Words, floating void,
Slashed and drained
She is the daughter of the ocean
Her thoughts float-succinct, soigné
Message appears on the surface,
To breathe in the endurance
For the fraction of the second,
Dare you attune?
Anatomy of fancy sloppy breaths,
Sleazy, disguised and blurred
Wear the beads of blinking stupor,
To catch her dreamy glimpse
Trinkets-serene and svelte,
She has sworn to dance in
Diving deep and gulping the black hole
You got the strength to hold her and stop?
The sense you derive is fake and bony
Fathom the nude darkness and,
Reap to sow…

12 comments:

  1. Wow!!! love the words you used, really it is a word mermaid!!

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    1. Thanks a lot Vandana for visiting my post :)

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  2. Love you a lot Sadia.. thanks a lot for this beautiful dedication.. you made my birthday special.. :)

    God bless you!

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  3. This is so amazing, beautiful, and touching :)

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  4. dang, this really takes it up a notch at...anatomy of fancy sloppy breathes....lots of energy in this...and really focused as well...leading up to that last line...and the truth of it

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    1. I'm so glad Brian that you liked it , can't say a word...it makes me fly high :)

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  5. So so so touching :') Very beautiful. The words you have used to describe is amazing, such an extensive vocabulary! :)

    Hugs!

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    1. Aaww...was missing you sweets, thanks a lot :)

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    2. Missed you too! Semester exams going on, isliye busy! :*

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