Time—not
a plastic toy
Deepest
darkest shadow
Hiding
in the hour-glass
Seeping
into its’ camber
Winding
along the neck
Weighting
the free sand
—Hanging
upside down
Loosen
legs 'n arms of it
Fastened
as—Entwined
Slacken-off
vile strands
Crawling
along the spine
—the
impious hour-glass
They
read— You’re near
Can
skin-smell your fear
Look
through your desire
And,
can drain it to mire
Dreading
'n Intimidating
Forbidden—Incessant—
Those
myriad sand grains
You
fancy to get severed?
If
not, dare not play with
—those
slithering grains…
nice...really cool...my fav bit was the last 2 lines.....if you dare not dont play with those grains....i might dare...smiles.
ReplyDeleteeven I do too, but its really frightening sometimes..thanks Brian:)
Deletehey new reader here. These lines above....no words can describe. xo
ReplyDeleteWelcome, would love to have you here time and again...Thanks a lot :)
DeleteThis poem really creates a cool atmosphere here, Sadia. A bit eerie in its entirety. I was going to mention the last two lines Brian mentioned as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :)
DeleteVery Nice Poem Sadia. ! !
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Thanks :)
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