~ Yes, now I vision … ~
“I love your Almond
shaped eyes,
Hazel of it rebounds
the sunshine”
He said the words for
the sixth time
Shunning the dull
skeptic thoughts,
It again curved my lips
into a smile ..
How guileless are his
loving ways
Manifesting a bemused
reflection
“Should I give my
love-luck a try?
Falling for his words
worth a shot?’’
He wouldn’t mirror the
image of those,
Who, once called me
their eternal muse
I’d breathe it much an incessant
time
Betrayal doomed, trust
took to slime ..
He wouldn’t parade his
biceps or sedan
Dear clock ticks-tocks
holding my hand
Sweeping away the nip, memory
thresh
Oh, yeah —
His eyes look through
my dainty flesh
Into my scared soul ...
and beyond …
Yes, now I vision,
He makes me whole …
He makes me whole …
a little different is not bad...perhaps being different from the ones before is a good thing no? smiles.
ReplyDeletehappy sunday sadia
Yes, its better :)
DeleteSundays can't be happy Brian, with truck loads of household chores...i feel like eloping to some peaceful place, especially on sundays :P
I love your almond shaped eyes ,hazel of it rebounds da sunshine. I wish I could also start anything, which draws us into it immediately...
ReplyDeleteYou make me smile always, your writings too suck in the reader, the moment he or she reads the first few lines...trust me :)
DeleteThis is so romantic ... wow :D And I fell in love with "I love your Almond shaped eyes, Hazel of it rebounds the sunshine." Amazing description !!!
ReplyDeleteNothing as compare to yours, i'd learn from you and other exceptionally good writers :)
DeleteHow guileless are his loving ways
ReplyDeleteHe doesn't parade his biceps or sedan
These two lines stand out for me in the poem. I have seen people traverse from point 1 to point 2. And that's the difference. It doesn't happen with age but maturity that a girl and even guys begin to understand what they actually need in their partner :)
Beautiful poem :)
Yes, definitely...the ability to differentiate really matters...Thanks a lot :)
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