Friday 14 June 2013

I Hate(Love) You




I Hate(Love) You

You treasured my wrongs
And, sealed my sins
Nobody do that, then
Why should you?
I hate you for
Every time you hold my hand
And look into my eyes
To make me believe
That I’m not alone
I hate you for
Every time you wait for me
To swim back to your abode
I ain’t worth this
Let me drown
Into the mire of my fate
I hate you for
Every time you say those words
Making me feel your
Undying love, and
Eternal concern
I hate you for
Every time I REALLY hate myself
For I can’t be with you
Though—I love you so….

13 comments:

  1. So beautiful! <3

    Loved the last two lines a lot. :)

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  2. A LOT of emotion wrapped up in this piece...conflicgint emotion. I S'pose that's te way that matters of the heart are at times :-)

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    1. They're conflicting, Keith, most of the time...Don't they say, love is difficult :)

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  3. Every word is so heart touching. I do not hate it. you said the words many hearts want to say. Poetic form is always lovely.
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  4. dang...def lots of emotion in this one...esp for one that looks you in the eye and makes you believe before they rip your heart out....felt piece...

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  5. Once I conceived the same thought... being solution-less I almost stopped penning poems... only very sometimes I do...
    Keep penning...
    :-)

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    1. I write with these thoughts framing my words...so, I shall, always :)

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  6. Loved the theme of separation and more ,of being in love and expressions of love....beautiful!!!

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