Monday, 21 April 2014

~ Benaam Ghazal ~



~ Benaam Ghazal ~

Uudi gulaabi, ishq e khumaari,
Aab si chanchal, na sanjeeda —
Takhallus e bekhudi e jawaani ..
Imkaan e muhabbat, shuru hi thi bas,
Tasdeeq e khaatma, tu ne kar dali …
Perwerish e naqsh e qadam phir tera,
Guncha e yaad yun kar maine sanjoya,
Naqaabile tawaj’h gosha e dil mera,
Raiza e alfaaz hanoot hue wahin pe,
Jo haqeer O nakarah they abhi talak,
Kitni hi unkahi soz tehreeron main se ..
Bayan they kabhi nargisi nigaahon se,
Yak jhoote yak sache hazar dilshad kisse,
Par dekh — aaj numaya nai hoti hai ye,
Zuban pe aayi meri guftagu e ehem bhi ..
Tu matla, tu maqta, radeef, qaafiya bhi tu,
Benaam ghazal hona — meri bas kahani!





Hanoot – Embalm (as in Mummification)
Haqeer – Insignificant
Numaya – Significant


4 comments:

  1. you write beautifully-enjoyed the ghazal...
    Tu matla, tu maqta, radeef, qaafiya bhi tu,
    Benaam ghazal hona — meri bas kahani!

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  2. see that is not even fair...anjum understands and i dont...smiles...
    ghazal is a very cool form though....

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  3. Another piece of erotica--and we poor English-speaking people are banned from the reading experience.
    But the IMAGE IS GREAT--must we write our own words to the prompt? Is THAT what is going on hjere, Sadia? Hmmmmm? Smiles
    PEACE and LIGHT
    Steve

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  4. lovely lines!! aapka Ghazal bouhut khubsurat!! smiles:))

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