Tuesday, 19 August 2014

~ A Painting … ~



~ A Painting … ~
Blunt and raw … casted in —
Molten ambrosial colors,
Strokes of earthen orange,
Blended in deep love,
Stirred by obsession,
Softened fascination,
Besotted expressions,
Acerbic fervent rains,
Numb eruptions … a fresh carnal volcano …
With the hot melted, piquant magma, hither —
Let me paint the canvas … of thine imagination …
Brushing my desires,
On the palette of thy parted, smitten lips,
Drawing a pattern — a salacious lure,
Squiggling fingers, contouring thy navel,
Silhouetting thy nape,
Sketching a pristine design —
Heated, yet so lulled … on thy moist skin …
Let’s ignite the surrounding,
Sever the nebulous bonds,
Set the serene sky aflame,
Placid trees, too, shalt succumb,
To thy muffled whispers … to damp moans …
Silent cries … stealthy ties ……
And, when our lips shalt unfasten,
Cooling down the Volcano,
Watering the chasm, thus, so beholden —
Poised lava … turning dull grey …
Heated sky, smoked and astray,
With blurred teary eyes,
And fuzzy senses, passionate still,
Shalt shower us —
With hued daubs … to stay … forever …
Baring us … as a Painting … in a subtle tone ……

7 comments:

  1. Brian .... this is not the translation of the previous poem, but a new take on the same painting in English .... a bit raw one ....

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  2. Wow, what an amazing take on the painting. "Numb eruptions … a fresh carnal volcano"...amazing.

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    1. Thank you so much, Keith ..... Smiles!

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  3. ha. nice...thank you...i think my fav part is painting/writing the patterns on the lips...obviously a lot of passion, so the inclusion of the volcano sets the tone as well...

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    1. Thank you loads, Brian .... for picking out your favorite part .... smiles ..

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  4. This one is to devour, Sadia...and I did. Every thought, word, line is worthy of the whole. Sure appreciate that you took time to write a "take-off" for us. It is "description exotic, erotic", exquisitely done. The ending tied it with a ribbon for me:

    "...Heated sky..........Shalt shower us —
    With hued daubs … to stay … forever …
    Baring us … as a Painting … in a subtle tone ……"

    I like "forevers", ya know. Eternity shall NOT be a lonely place!

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    1. Glad that you liked it so much ... Steve .... Showers of praises from you ... Thank you so much ...

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