Saturday, 15 December 2012

Trial Time..

Hues of orange dripping into the shades of sorrow spread across the horizon, as it woes.

His beloved mother awaits for the sacrifice he once promised, time to pay back and he will be doing it gallantly.

No fear, no worries and no emotions can hold him back now.

His passion and selfless love will be retrieved and his mother will breathe the air of enduring and exuberating joy of freedom.

He lovingly kisses Shimi on her cheek as the colour of fear and loss flushes through her transparent but pale skin, very clear to her that she is losing him forever but no regrets, its her trial time too.

This five sentence fiction has been shared on Five Sentence Fiction – Devotion


  1. I loved the way you portrayed it ... it's sad but very well written !!!

  2. Beautiful poem. I love the opening line, very moving. Thank you for your nice comments on my blog :)

  3. Stunning writing, I loved your imagery and the strong emotions in this. Loved it!